"1 to 5 recipients = 2 to 4 revisions
5 to 10 recipients = 8 to 12 revisions
Company-wide or to Executive Committee = 30 to 50 revisions
Even the simplest missive to one person benefits from a couple of extra passes, and if it's going to the management committee, expect everyone to have changes (and changes to those changes).
Here's a checklist to consider when revising:"
"'I thought I wanted a new era of transparency and accountability, but honestly, I just can't handle it,' Ohio resident Nathan Pletcher said. ...'From now on, ....' Pletcher added. 'Tell me my savings are okay, everybody has a job, and we're No. 1 again. Please, just lie to my face.'
"Several Big 4 athletic programs were recognized for academic excellence: UB’s women’s cross country and swimming teams, Niagara’s women’s basketball and volleyball teams, and St. Bonaventure’s men’s tennis and women’s tennis teams were awarded Public Recognition Awards for the 2008-09 school year."
